My name is Tian Yan Zhang. My goals is to successfully complete my education in BMCC and get my degree in accounting. After that, I plan on get a four years degree in Baruch college. Hopefully after i finish my education, i will be able to find a good job in accounting.
I have learned alot in English 101 in this class. writing a position essay and critical essay are just some of things that I learned in English 101. I hope to get a good grade in this class so that I can improve my GPA and move on to English 201 next term.
I want you to read my position paper, because I have a lot of confidence in this paper. The reason why I think that this is my best paper is because I have done a lot of reseach on it. When I was writing this essay, I learned a lot of facts about the war like how many people died in the Middle East since the war started, how many protests were there and how much money it takes in order to continue the war. When I started out writing this essay, I just wrote down the thesis and my three main points. Then I wrote down what I know about the war in the Middle East. When I went home, I did more reaserch on this topic so that I can expand more on my essay. After that, I put in my conclusion and my essay was done. After I got my grade on this essay, I continued to expand more on this essay. I put in more of my own opinions and proof read my eassy again.