My name is Ryan Aqui. I am a filipino citizen. I've been living here in New York for three years with my mom and relatives. We are four sibling and im the second to the youngest. Im the only one of my brother and sisters lives here in the US. My family and I are planning to move to California next year because my mom doesn't like the cold weather. Everytime the winter comes, she always scapes from the weather which she goes to the Philippines for vacation until the cold is gone. My father was passed away three years ago when my passport released from my country. It was a sad story because he was the one who supposed to go with me here in the U.S. but it was late.
Research Paper/Criticism/Response-Ryan A.- This is the essay that I want you to consider for my grade.
This is some of the work that I've done but I don't want you to consider it for my grade.
position paper- Ryan A. --Education
Research Paper/Criticism/Response-Ryan A.
Personal Narrative- Ryan A.--Graded
InClass Essay-Ryan A.--This is the paper I did to show how I could perform in class, with a 90 minute time limit--it's the equivalent of the final exam.
These are the comments that I've received from my classmates.
Posted at Sep 09/2004 10:18 AM:
nikaury acosta: hey ryan, i love philipian food. do you cook? good in california. i'm sorry to hear about your dad. stay positive.
Posted at Sep 12/2004 08:42 PM:
Hau-Mui Cheng: Hi, Ryan. I'm glad to see you in the same class again. Actually, California is a great place. I want to go there too because I like to live in the clean environment and the warm weather. If your family members move to California, it will be a great place to live. On the other hand, I'm very sorry to hear about your dad.
Posted at Sep 14/2004 06:06 PM:
john tam:Hi! I'm sorry to hear about your dad. I sure he's happy for you. the weather here is hard to get use too.hope you have fun in california.
Posted at Sep 15/2004 09:05 PM:
Claver Opali: i am sorry for your father. however it looks like you have a very good familly.
Posted at Sep 16/2004 05:35 PM:
Celina Padilla: I too am sorry to hear the passing of your father. I can't begin to imagine to lose my own. Were you close? I am sure that he is proud of you taking care of your mom and trying make something better of yourself. You mention your mom wants to go Cali, but what about you? What do you want? Maybe you can add somethings more about yourself like, what are your aspirations? or your hobbies?Take care!
Posted at Sep 16/2004 09:57 PM:
Tian Yan Zhang: hi Ryan,This is a great paragraph. so sorry about your father. Have you gone back to Philippine since you got here?
